Thursday, March 19, 2009

अतिथि डाक

Here is a guest post in the form of a poem by our super talented Tinni. Iss blog ki shobha ab aur bhi badh gayi. Thenkoo so much babes ;)


wings of poesy
soar into the sky
colours of the rainbow
enlighten even the night

blessed indeed are poets;
artists, lovers and friends

they may die, shrivel and wither
n still live through the gems they penned

oh how i wish to immortalize this life and times in rhyme
the verse is weak; the poet unknown
and yet i hope to raise the rhythm divine.

~ Tinni


After reading her poem, I got inspired and penned down one myself. Ekdum spontaneous on-the-spot types. So you guys have to now pick a winner out of the 2 poems. Here goes mine:

Twinkle twinkle little star,
How I wonder what you are,
Up above the world so high,
Like a diamond in the sky.

So go ahead and pick a winner. You can use parameters like originality, literary depth, blah blah, bleh bleh ;) And remember while choosing the poem, mine is the latter one. The 2nd poem. Nichu waala. The one 3 lines above ;)

32 comments:

  1. TINNII !!!!! mast hai !!


    Tinni wins !! - my best friend after all ! ;)

    Urv loses !! :P
    koi baat nai beta. tum bhi sekkh jaoge. :)

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  2. Koi nahi.. Haar kar jeet ne waale ko Baazigar kehte hain :P

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  3. omg..so tuff...shit...Urv how am i supposed to make such a difficult choice :( :(

    :P Trinaa wins!! :D :D *applause applause*
    Although, your attempt was good too ;) :P

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  4. diplomatic ans dena hai toh dono winner hai bhyaya..

    sach bolna hai toh i like the size of urv ka poem and words tinni

    jhooth bolna hai toh dono bore kar rahe ho
    :P

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  5. welcome back dude..

    Tinni wins hands down.. I guess I have heard your poem somewhere before, can't recall..

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  6. i like urs..d other one is by some big-headed goose. u win. toh party kab?

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  7. Nichu walla wins hands down ..wait I heard this somewhere :P

    nice blog!!!

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  8. Niche walla is so nice and simple! I'm sure every person in the world will be hooked on to it once you release it :)

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  9. Trinaaaaaaaaaaaaaa U WIN!!!!

    and URV....sudhar jaao:P

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  10. See, let me make it clear!

    If the nichu wala poem hadn't existed, no1 would have understood the top wala!

    Therefore there is no need for any competition...! Match drawn!

    # Trinaa
    Gud girl! }:-)

    # Urv
    Welcome back!

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  11. URV WINS!

    coz in my world trinaa ko judge karne ki meri koi aukaad hi nahi hai. jaan hai woh meri, life i mean.

    plus i have pea sized brains,
    usmein nursery rhyme hi samati hai :D

    bell-come buuaaccckkk!!!!

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  12. Urv .. you are the winnder bro.. i loved the depth in your poem.. liked your rhyming style.. liked the colours in the poem.. your poem was also aout science cos it spoke about stars..you are not only a poet but also a scientist...

    you related the star to a diamond.. there you show your creativity...

    full marks to you..

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  13. @all..siiiiiiiiiigh! i take back my nomination..you-are-we wins! :D

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  14. hey wb..
    draw hai...
    both the poem r gud..
    I read ur twice to get the meaning.... :|

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  15. :P :P :P :P...
    I take my words back..i read it trice..
    u r clear winner :D

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  16. ~ Mads
    Jao tumse baat nai karte :P :P :P

    *Applause applause for her* :)

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  17. ~ joie
    Sach bolte waqt bhi kitni diplomacy.. So then I guess I win on the originality part :P

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  18. ~ sarath
    Thanks bro :)

    Must be Deja vu and nothing else ;)

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  19. ~ tinns
    shuttup!

    Party tussi bolo tab.. Jidhar bolo udhar :)

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  20. ~ rahul
    Welcome to the blog buddy :)

    Tujhe bhi lagta hai ho raha hai Deja vu :P

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  21. ~ rakesh
    Thank u so much Rakesh! I am overwhelmed ;)

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  22. ~ santa
    Hum toh bhai jaise hai waise rahenge :P :P :P

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  23. ~ abhi
    Match draw nahi hua.. India jeet gaya re.. woh bhi 10 wickets se :D

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  24. ~ express
    Aaawwww.. cho chweet :)

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  25. ~ chriz
    Omigod Chrissy! You are the best! Thanks a ton for the appreciation ;)

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  26. ~ amrita
    Now read it the 4th time at night under the stars :P :P :P

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  27. Sorry Tinni, but i would say Urv wins cause he is original , and confident, and deep enough to pen down someone elses work.. LOL

    Haiku Poems

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  28. Just for originality... you win buddy!

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  29. well .... it is a tough call ... but I pick Urv .. cause .. well the fact that i remember it :) and sadly enuf after reading it am actually humming it right now

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  30. I think, that you are mistaken. Let's discuss. Write to me in PM.

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  31. As the expert, I can assist. Together we can find the decision.

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