Here is a guest post in the form of a poem by our super talented Tinni. Iss blog ki shobha ab aur bhi badh gayi. Thenkoo so much babes ;)
wings of poesy
soar into the sky
colours of the rainbow
enlighten even the night
blessed indeed are poets;
artists, lovers and friends
they may die, shrivel and wither
n still live through the gems they penned
oh how i wish to immortalize this life and times in rhyme
the verse is weak; the poet unknown
and yet i hope to raise the rhythm divine.
~ Tinni
After reading her poem, I got inspired and penned down one myself. Ekdum spontaneous on-the-spot types. So you guys have to now pick a winner out of the 2 poems. Here goes mine:
Twinkle twinkle little star,
How I wonder what you are,
Up above the world so high,
Like a diamond in the sky.
How I wonder what you are,
Up above the world so high,
Like a diamond in the sky.
So go ahead and pick a winner. You can use parameters like originality, literary depth, blah blah, bleh bleh ;) And remember while choosing the poem, mine is the latter one. The 2nd poem. Nichu waala. The one 3 lines above ;)
32 comments:
TINNII !!!!! mast hai !!
Tinni wins !! - my best friend after all ! ;)
Urv loses !! :P
koi baat nai beta. tum bhi sekkh jaoge. :)
Koi nahi.. Haar kar jeet ne waale ko Baazigar kehte hain :P
omg..so tuff...shit...Urv how am i supposed to make such a difficult choice :( :(
:P Trinaa wins!! :D :D *applause applause*
Although, your attempt was good too ;) :P
diplomatic ans dena hai toh dono winner hai bhyaya..
sach bolna hai toh i like the size of urv ka poem and words tinni
jhooth bolna hai toh dono bore kar rahe ho
:P
welcome back dude..
Tinni wins hands down.. I guess I have heard your poem somewhere before, can't recall..
i like urs..d other one is by some big-headed goose. u win. toh party kab?
Nichu walla wins hands down ..wait I heard this somewhere :P
nice blog!!!
Niche walla is so nice and simple! I'm sure every person in the world will be hooked on to it once you release it :)
Trinaaaaaaaaaaaaaa U WIN!!!!
and URV....sudhar jaao:P
See, let me make it clear!
If the nichu wala poem hadn't existed, no1 would have understood the top wala!
Therefore there is no need for any competition...! Match drawn!
# Trinaa
Gud girl! }:-)
# Urv
Welcome back!
URV WINS!
coz in my world trinaa ko judge karne ki meri koi aukaad hi nahi hai. jaan hai woh meri, life i mean.
plus i have pea sized brains,
usmein nursery rhyme hi samati hai :D
bell-come buuaaccckkk!!!!
Urv .. you are the winnder bro.. i loved the depth in your poem.. liked your rhyming style.. liked the colours in the poem.. your poem was also aout science cos it spoke about stars..you are not only a poet but also a scientist...
you related the star to a diamond.. there you show your creativity...
full marks to you..
@all..siiiiiiiiiigh! i take back my nomination..you-are-we wins! :D
hey wb..
draw hai...
both the poem r gud..
I read ur twice to get the meaning.... :|
:P :P :P :P...
I take my words back..i read it trice..
u r clear winner :D
~ Mads
Jao tumse baat nai karte :P :P :P
*Applause applause for her* :)
~ joie
Sach bolte waqt bhi kitni diplomacy.. So then I guess I win on the originality part :P
~ sarath
Thanks bro :)
Must be Deja vu and nothing else ;)
~ tinns
shuttup!
Party tussi bolo tab.. Jidhar bolo udhar :)
~ rahul
Welcome to the blog buddy :)
Tujhe bhi lagta hai ho raha hai Deja vu :P
~ rakesh
Thank u so much Rakesh! I am overwhelmed ;)
~ santa
Hum toh bhai jaise hai waise rahenge :P :P :P
~ abhi
Match draw nahi hua.. India jeet gaya re.. woh bhi 10 wickets se :D
~ express
Aaawwww.. cho chweet :)
~ chriz
Omigod Chrissy! You are the best! Thanks a ton for the appreciation ;)
~ amrita
Now read it the 4th time at night under the stars :P :P :P
Sorry Tinni, but i would say Urv wins cause he is original , and confident, and deep enough to pen down someone elses work.. LOL
Haiku Poems
Just for originality... you win buddy!
hahaha... tinni wins here.
well .... it is a tough call ... but I pick Urv .. cause .. well the fact that i remember it :) and sadly enuf after reading it am actually humming it right now
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